I'm not a fan of the bike shorts look. I wasn't all that keen on it when Andre Agassi was doing it in the early 90s. But I was particularly perturbed by the opening line of the linked story: So you’ve always wanted to get inside Serena Williams’ clothes? If you have to make your hook overtly sexual, you're not a very creative writer.
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I'm not a fan of the bike shorts look. I wasn't all that keen on it when Andre Agassi was doing it in the early 90s.
But I was particularly perturbed by the opening line of the linked story: So you’ve always wanted to get inside Serena Williams’ clothes?
If you have to make your hook overtly sexual, you're not a very creative writer.
I didn't like it either, but I am so used to seeing opening lines like that now that I just cringe and keep reading.
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